Feedback Evaluation

Sara met with Nick with the mock up cards i had made and she received some feedback on the changes he wants made.

-The food safety section has to be changed to 'Food Hygiene'.
-The food safety character needs to change he is know irrelevant.
-The colours need to be changed to yellow, green and a darker blue.
-The illustration 'wash hands' needs to show hands doing this.
-The illustration 'chop/peel food' needs to show hands doing this.
-The typography has to be in lower case as the children have not yet learned capital letters.

I feel that the illustrations of wash hands was weak and did needed improving, the change of the section did push back time as 'food safety' was the information i was asked to illustrate for, however i will work on the redesign of the illustrations and hopefully the outcome will be a stronger one and make the characters more appealing a understanding for the children.